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    Greetings, Riders of The Shadowlands !

    When between the shadows strolling,
    Always watch for any trap
    'Cause the courtain that is falling
    Is in fact... just going up !

    Nice to find you. Please accept this little poetry of mine - along with my wannabe ​presence.

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    Re: Greetings, Riders of The Shadowlands !

    Welcome! Nice poetry.
    This collector of useless clutter.

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    Re: Greetings, Riders of The Shadowlands !

    Thank you, Sinera - for liking my poetry, and for being the first (and only) member to respond my salute.
    And to underline that, here is another little try, inspired by your avatar:

    When you hold that little lute
    Gently pinching all its strings
    Not just that you're looking cute
    But your psyche gets its wings...

    And to be more clear - poetry is not for presenting myself as some kind of a "romantic wanderer"... hahahaa...but it's a tool. A very efficient one, I might add, when dealing with the Astral Realms.
    Like songs also, poems caress the subconscious, awakening the right hemisphere's potential - vital in understanding the...Shadowlands.


    Thanks again, and I look forward to exchange other thoughts with you.2018-10-27-15-29-15-1450494289.jpg
    Cogito, ergo sum.

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    Re: Greetings, Riders of The Shadowlands !

    Oops sorry MondEgo, Missed your greetings post.
    Belated but a sincere Welcome to the forum.
    Yes I agree with Sinera, nice poetry. Communication is always nicer I feel when it is received via a song or a small delicate rhyme. I tried to magnify the words printed above titled Midnight Sun but couldnt make it out. Would be interested in reading it if possible.
    For ever I'll remember.
    Dreams are the doorways to the heavens.
    Look into your eyes and I see mine.
    She is part of your deepest thoughts.
    The destination is not the importance, but the journey. What we do here leads us to our destination.
    ( my soul. )

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    Re: Greetings, Riders of The Shadowlands !

    Thank you also, Susan. Better late than never - it applies to welcoming, too.
    The Midnight Sun poem does not belong to any famous writer, but to a couple of native americans. It was part of a cultural collection back in 1988, and the drawing was made by the poet's lover (the names being so strange, I can't tell who was the "he" or the "she").

    To expand my opinion, poetry works best not when addressing to the right hemisphere only, but when reaches both sides of the brain (simultaneously). The japanese haiku is, therefore, an excelent form, 'cause it combines feelings and heart, along with analytical efforts required by rhyme, rythm, limited syllables and letters. This forces both hemispheres to work together, sort like a " dual-core" CPU.

    I attach an inlarged version of the poem, and if it's still unreadible, I'll write the text in a P.M.Screenshot_2018-10-27-22-14-02.jpg
    Cogito, ergo sum.

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    Re: Greetings, Riders of The Shadowlands !

    Hi MondEgo .

    I am also interested to know how the poem goes, I canīt read it eighder.
    Welcom to the site.

    Love
    ia




    Quote Originally Posted by MondEgo View Post
    Thank you also, Susan. Better late than never - it applies to welcoming, too.
    The Midnight Sun poem does not belong to any famous writer, but to a couple of native americans. It was part of a cultural collection back in 1988, and the drawing was made by the poet's lover (the names being so strange, I can't tell who was the "he" or the "she").

    To expand my opinion, poetry works best not when addressing to the right hemisphere only, but when reaches both sides of the brain (simultaneously). The japanese haiku is, therefore, an excelent form, 'cause it combines feelings and heart, along with analytical efforts required by rhyme, rythm, limited syllables and letters. This forces both hemispheres to work together, sort like a " dual-core" CPU.

    I attach an inlarged version of the poem, and if it's still unreadible, I'll write the text in a P.M.Screenshot_2018-10-27-22-14-02.jpg
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    I am safe and I am free.
    I am powerfully protected.
    I am master of my body and ruler of my mind.
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    Re: Greetings, Riders of The Shadowlands !

    Loved it.
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    Re: Greetings, Riders of The Shadowlands !

    The text of the poem - requested by IA56:

    My ephemeral beauty
    Dancing into my life
    After so many years
    And then leaving me
    So strangely as you came

    My mystic lady
    Of childhood dreams
    Has returned to haunt me
    I thought you'd left
    As you said you would

    Yet now I see
    The things I loved
    Before me
    Embodied in a lithe
    Young figure
    Of a western cree

    That being clarified, I consider myself welcomed, and I thank you (all) again.
    Cogito, ergo sum.

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    Re: Greetings, Riders of The Shadowlands !

    Quote Originally Posted by MondEgo View Post
    The text of the poem - requested by IA56:

    My ephemeral beauty
    Dancing into my life
    After so many years
    And then leaving me
    So strangely as you came

    My mystic lady
    Of childhood dreams
    Has returned to haunt me
    I thought you'd left
    As you said you would

    Yet now I see
    The things I loved
    Before me
    Embodied in a lithe
    Young figure
    Of a western cree

    That being clarified, I consider myself welcomed, and I thank you (all) again.
    Thank you MondEgo,
    What does the Word cree mean? Is there Another Word for it....??

    Love
    ia
    Core Affirmation: I am loved and I am worthy,
    I am safe and I am free.
    I am powerfully protected.
    I am master of my body and ruler of my mind.
    By Robert Bruce

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    Re: Greetings, Riders of The Shadowlands !

    "Cree" is another name for a native american tribe (algonquin, I think) located in the XVIII-th century somewhere between US and Canada.
    It relates to the authors being (probably) of the same origin.
    The drawing is more interesting, suggesting a duality (mind and soul).
    Cogito, ergo sum.

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